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Hey, smexay, coco here for a review. I won't be too picky, I promise... must say, watching my mother rot in a mental hospital was pleasing. Only just thinking about ...

Oh, this is so lovely :D ! I have absolutely nothing else to say except I thought this piece was so wonderfully written and I can't wait to read more! ...

A rooster screeched and Nicolai coughed—a deep, lazily [to me 'lazily' sounds a little awkward. maybe you could have 'lazy' instead] furious sound that made him blink his eyes open. ...

Hey Ofir! Coco here for chapter 5. I'm really glad that my reviews have helped so far, I'm hoping this one does to. The Party - Chapter Five The entire ...

Hey, River! Coco here for your first review. Hope this helps! The Time Capsule  By River Shields   It did not begin today but twelve years ago; it began with ...

Hi, Wheadee, coco here! I liked this, it was your typical American teenage story with some really great narration on the part of your character Bris, she sort of came ...

Hello, Tianna! Welcome to YWS, I'm coco and I'll be reviewing you today :smt003 Okay, let's get started then, shall we? CHAPTER TWO Memories Are The Gates To The Soul ...

Hi, Attolia! Coco here for a review! Let me start off with what I loved about this. One word: characters. Madame Breton and Adele share some really great dialogue together, ...

Hey Evil, welcome to YWS! I'm coco and I'll be reviewing you today. Here goes... “Darren . . . ,” my mother croaked, kicking a blanket onto the floor as ...

Hey, Majic, welcome to YWS! Okay, so here's my mini review.... Dim light filtered into the tumble-down shed through a small, dusty window placed high on the wall opposite the ...

Hey, DM! coco here again! Boy, am I glad you've put up chapter 2, it was so awesome and let me tell you why :arrow: Firstly, your MC - I ...

Hey, ofir! Here's my review! The Party - chapter four The gate creaked as usual as I walked the stone road to my house. The hairs on the back of ...

Hey, Coco here! I don't really have anything to nit-pick here. This story sounds awesome, I especially like the names you've given your character's - very creative and they sound ...

Hey, Lisa, chocolate lover here to review :smt003 I haven't done a review like this EVER so here goes... Chapter 1 Fear, blood, and tears. The smell was so strong, ...

Hey, Sean! Coco here :smt003 This is really good for something that's just a collection of thoughts you've knocked together! :shock: I'll start with what I love. This is really ...