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Hey everyone!!

Please comment down below absolutely anything you would like me to review! My reviews will be realistic- not too harsh but not too soft.

One thing I ask in return is for you to check out my Medium Blog at the link I've posted below. If you're a Medium user I would really appreciate a follow and a like for my work.

https://medium.com/@laurenhaughey6/the- ... 1531920899

Thank you!

Now let's get on with these reviews! :D




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Hi, Lauren. Cool blog! Super interesting too. My computer battery's about to die, so I'll do this quickly: Alison
you don't HAVE to read it all if you get bored. In fact, let me know if you got bored! :P Thanks dude. Let me know if there's something you'd like me to review, too. Unfortunately I'm not a Medium user so I can't subscribe, but I'll have another look soon when I've got more comp. battery XD
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hey can you review my story, I'll look at it now!Box Of Chocolate Prologue

Box Of Chocolate Prologue




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Could you possibly review this? Belli Gloria

Thank you! I'll check out the site~




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I need a review on a story I am in the process of writing. Here ya go:

https://xjoeyx.writerfeedpad.com/2
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will you review the 3rd chapter of my book? It's called a young spy and a young cop.
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Hey! Super cool blog!

Could you maybe review this? You don't have too if you don't like it or anything, I was just wondering. Thanks!

I Hate My Life - Chapter 1
I want to read your works!

Message me about anything! I'm always willing to talk.




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Hi Laurenh6

Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Genre(s): romance/queer
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition




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Hi Laurenh6

Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Genre(s): romance/queer
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition




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Hello, I posted two poems
profile/Leviari/portfolio

I really would appreciate some feedback (especially on maybe I am not unhappy). Thank you




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Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering




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Hey there, Laurenh6! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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