Nate's Review Day Reviewing Thread

What I'll review:
- Must be posted in July 2010 (nothing older)
- Must be under 2,000 words
- Preferably no poetry, but I'll still review it (I just stink at reviewing poetry)


In making your request, please provide:
- A link!
- Anything in particular you what critiqued (e.g., dialogue, grammar, imagery, etc.).
- Just a short one or two sentence synopsis of the work in question.
- If a poem, no worries about a synopsis although I do appreciate it if you say why you wrote the poem (i.e., did something inspire you?)


This thread will only be open for Review Day. Due to time constraints, I can only accept the first ten review requests.

Hi my first 3 chapters were posted 26-29th June if you'd make an exception? With chapter 4 posted 18th July.
If acceptable:
topic65975.html chapter 1
topic66117.html chapter 2, please use this chapters novel feature to get 3,4 as 1 got mixed up... long complicated matter
I pretty much just want to know how well it reads despite its lack of grammar which I'm not the best at.
Also how the dialogue for the girls read.
Also if you enjoyed reading my story
Oh and the story is about 4 girls, Sam, Amy, Emily Rose and Sarah who were once best friends when their powers come back again and they have to stick together to find out the true source of their powers.
Thanks

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