Soul-Crusher is looking for souls to crush! (Accepting)

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Sachiko
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Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:11 pm
Sachiko says... · Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:11 pm
Except not really. I don't think I'm very good at harsh critiques.

I will review the following:

Short Stories of any Genre

Art & Photography

What I am horrid at reviewing but will attempt to anyway:

Poetry

Non-fiction

I generally try and avoid novels as I generally have no idea what's going on and will probably not be able to give a sufficient review. However, if you're looking for Grammar nitpicks or anything of the sort, I could probably be convinced otherwise. :D
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Jiggity
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Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:27 am
Jiggity says... · Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:27 am
GO READ MAH STAWRY. You've already commented on chapter one. There are two others...help with either one would be good.

I MAY EVEN BUY YOU SHOES IF YOU HALP ME.

I absolutely despise the first half of chapter two now, I want to kill it. Chapter Three I'm okay with, just might be a little soon for it.

So, yus. You, review. I, get shoes. Win-win.
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Sachiko
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Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:29 am
Sachiko says... · Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:29 am
Chapter two is all set, Jigs! :D I'll probably get to chapter three sometime tomorrow.
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Jiggity
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:28 am
Jiggity says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:28 am
*gnaws on your face*

You are awesome. Here, have some loff.

*loffs*
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MiaParamore
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:14 am
MiaParamore says... · Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:14 am
Hi there. Would you mind reviewing this for me? its non-fiction : Just 1411 left
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Sachiko
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:28 am
Sachiko says... · Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:28 am
All set, Shubhi!
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:28 pm
Sins says... · Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:28 pm
Why hello there.
Could you please crush my soul? :smt005

This is a rough draft, but I'd like your opinion on it! Thanks.

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Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:39 pm
WritingWords says... · Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:39 pm
Hi, I am a beginning writer and I was hoping for someone to review this. Please review if you can! Thank you!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post692600.html#p692600
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Sachiko
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Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:25 pm
Sachiko says... · Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:25 pm
Your pieces are all set, Skins and WritingWords!
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Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:46 pm
Rosendorn says... · Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:46 pm
topic62866.html

Please? :D (That segment's only about 700 words)
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Hannah
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Sun May 02, 2010 4:25 am
Hannah says... · Sun May 02, 2010 4:25 am
SACHI, PLEASE?!

Her Last Drink Is Coffee!? That is the first part, and the second part is in 'related links'!! Please!? I love you.
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Sachiko
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Sun May 02, 2010 5:59 am
Sachiko says... · Sun May 02, 2010 5:59 am
Rosey and Hannah, I'll try and get to your pieces sometime Sunday/Monday. :D This weekend has been busy for me.
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Sat Jun 17, 2023 10:15 am
DreamyAlice says... · Sat Jun 17, 2023 10:15 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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