oh, FINE... if you insist.

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tobyrocks17
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:10 am
tobyrocks17 says... · Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:10 am
Since school's starting up again, I'll start editing again. Feel free to post any story/poem/creative piece, any size, any genre although I am much better at critiquing stories than poems, since I often can't comprehend the depth and complexity of most poems.
(complexity is SO a word!) I'm also not that great at fan-fiction, but I will try my best.


- tobaielle




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empressoftheuniverse
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:44 am
empressoftheuniverse says... · Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:44 am
GREAT! Can you do both parts of my story? It's other fiction (dark other fiction, leaning kinda towards horror) and I would love some more reviews!
Here's part one:
viewtopic.php?t=52420
and part two
topic52460.html
If you don't like it and refuse to review it.. I understand.
Thanks so much
~Meagan
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Pretty Crazy
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:04 pm
Pretty Crazy says... · Mon Aug 31, 2009 6:04 pm
Please review this, I know I'm not explaining much but tell me what you think from this:
topic52445.html#p594815
there is a first and second part, you should probably read those first! :)
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DreamyAlice says... · Mon Jun 12, 2023 12:09 pm
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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