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So...I thought I'd try this out.

I'm not an expert on reviews (I'm not bad either) - but I'm on about 5 days a week, so you can probably expect a reply in less than 48 hours! I'm really trying to write better reviews, and I think I have made (lots of) progress from my first review! *shudders* oh the horror

What I will review:
Really, I'll review pretty much any any of piece (excluding essays - at least not yet. I haven't had much experience reviewing those.) My favorites are novels and short stories, but I will review poems!

What I will not review:
Anything rated 16+ or 18+ for either maturity content, or language. I will read some violence though (so 16+/18+ for violence is fine).

Anyway, REQUEST AWAY! :smt003

~Snazzy
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hi, I'm always looking for reviews, so if you want to take a look at anything in my portfolio it'd be appreciated :) I tend to avoid bad language in stories, but Catalina III does have two f-words x_x

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Hi Snazzy, could you please review my latest poem called Beware the Shadow Stalker. It is a mystery\suspense poem.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=125223#c560848




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Hi Snazzy, can I call you that? I have another request for you. :D

I would love if you could read my newest poem please, Serpent of the Sands part one. I am hoping to turn it into a story. :D
Here is the link. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-1-125597




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Sure @felistia! :D :D


Done, and done...and done! :D

R/N: I am ready for some more reviews! :D Request away! ;)
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Hi Snazzy, me again. I would love if you could very Serpent of the Sands part two. :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-2-125615




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Eyyooo,
If you get a chance could you review my chapter two of The Darkest of Dreams
I'll send you a million tons of mental nommy food as a thank you! :D If the internet let me I would send normal nommy food, but I have yet to work out how to do that... so the mental stuff will have to do for now....

The Darkest of Dreams- Chapter 2




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Hi Snaz!
I love your reviews and you've reviewed my work before. I'm to ask you to review my prologue to New Haven and the first chapter. I just updated the first chapter.
New Haven: Prologue




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@felistia : Done, and done! :D :D

@burninhell : Finished! :D

@MadWriter7 : I've got the Prologue reviewed, but I can't seem to find the first chapter... (I'll look again) If I can't find it, could you post/pm me a link? Thanks! :D
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Hi Snazzy, me again. I would love if you could review part three in the story\poem Serpent of the Sands.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Serpent-of-the-Sands-part-3-125675




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Hello! If you don't mind, could you please take a look at my poem? Those Three Words Thank you! :3
"We are, as a species, addicted to story. Even when the body goes to sleep, the mind stays up all night, telling itself stories" ~Jonathan Gottschall




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Hey there,
I'm new here and I posted a chapter of my new novel. It doesn't have a name yet, but I posted it by the name 'TAM'
Can you please give a review on it, I really appreciate it if you can. :smt001

Just keep writing, writing, WRITING! :D




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Hi! i need someone to review my work, "My Life in a Bizarre Town".

My Life in a Bizarre Town: Prologue



When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind