"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Come on guys. You're letting me get lazy. No one wants a review?
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Hey, I don't exactly need a review on my prologue (Fantastical: Book 1 The Mirror) but it wouldn't hurt to have more than two opinions on my story. I also recently posted the first chapter. Here are the links to both:
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
I know you said that you enjoy fantasy but... any chance you would review the later chapters of my novel. It's a narrative, sort of to do with insanity. Here's the link to the first part Imaginary Friends part 1: Mercy Thanks PS. There are a few *cough, cough* grammar issues on the first bits that I will be sorting out in the future. It does get better though, I assure you.
You cannot train yourself to notice, To feel pain, and swallow fear
Hey, there! Would you mind reviewing the first chapter (or two) of my novel? I have five chapters up, but one or two is fine. It's fantasy, but mostly because there are sorcerers in it. Thanks!
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes
