The Short-Count: November Poetry Contest!

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Here's my poem. My cat's named Sasha. :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=105672
And passersby who heard his echoing laughter wondered what kind of grief man had to go through before he could laugh so free.




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Can it be in French, 'cause all I'm thinking of is French >.> (*is going native*) If so then here:

On ne t'oublieras jamais,
Feu follet dans la nuit.

(We will never forget you
Will-o'-the-wisp in the night
-translation, yech)

My cat is Booboo.
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014

I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights




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Alright, I've decided to pick my pony (err...kitty?), and it's actually not one I've submitted on YWS.

The sweetest fruit
shields cyanide seeds.
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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This is mine:

"PALINDROME"


Blacken; in black.
Closed eyes, I close
this world words kiss.
Fallen in all, dim draws past
broken, invoked things missed.

I lay to rest in the gap between
wake and dreams -- see the
ache of great lingerings
and swinging day.


(I wanna name my kiddie kitty Maximus Decimus Meridius :))




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INSOMNIACS

In darkness we see
what is not
and it is there that we dream


(Kitty-Crestlefarber)
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.




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To fit my theme, how about this....

Falling
Never can take us
the madness does break us
Insanity
One by one, the monkeys fall
the jack does black
the queen does draw
the blade
the blade
it shines so bright
then we say good night, goodnight, goodnight

I have no cat, so i shall say bob is a pretty kitty.
Self quoting is the key to sounding wise and all knowing.




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to sum up the evening:
you opened enough doors and
your eyes dried out.

something i already knew: i am
too diluted to be
your saline.


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Mi gata bonita… Jasmine! :)
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco




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Mines fluffy.
Our thing progresses
I call and you come through
Blow all my friendships
To sit in hell with you
But we’re the greatest
They’ll hang us in the Louvre
Down the back, but who cares? Still the Louvre.

- Lorde

In my head I do everything right




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Okay here's my poem,

Look at me from far,
I have moved on
But the nearer you get,
You will see the scars and the bruises
Left by your ruthless deeds

And, I'd like my kitty to be named Unicorn. :)
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See ya later alligators! And Happy 2014 by the way. :)

-Aadygirl :)




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I made up my mind I am going submit this as my shot for the contest. :)

Hungry Cat




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Here's mine:

Spoiler
Human (n);
1. Blood
2. Bone
3. 'Accidental' schadenfreude
hiding killer instinct


I don't really like kitties, so can I have a ducky instead? I will name it Sarah.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

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My cat will be called Kat, and my story Cold




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Are you dead? You should have announced the winners by now.
Our thing progresses
I call and you come through
Blow all my friendships
To sit in hell with you
But we’re the greatest
They’ll hang us in the Louvre
Down the back, but who cares? Still the Louvre.

- Lorde

In my head I do everything right




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i just saw this now so this is what i wrote:
you told me he isn't your father
you told me that you are
yet why is he there when i need him and you are always far
please comment :)




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Congratulations!


After much deliberations, patience, and cats -- the results are in!

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@Persy, @indieeloise, @emmylou1995, @Rydia, @Karzkin, @therealme -- Congratulations! You should receive a PM from me shortly with your prizes! :)





To all other participants, thank you for your effort and patience! This contest was a blast, and your poems have all been great fun to read. You all will be receiving a little something from me as well in your inbox in these coming days ;)



True belonging doesn’t require you to change who you are, it requires you to be who you are.
— Brené Brown