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NeitherHereNorThere
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Sun May 27, 2012 8:35 pm
NeitherHereNorThere says... · Sun May 27, 2012 8:35 pm
Come one, come all!

NeitherHereNorThere is here to review your works! Any and all works except Historical Fiction and Sci-Fy.

I will review chapters of novels and I will keep reviewing them if I like them, I will review poems, short stories, art, anything you can come up with!

Just post on my wall(or here) what you want reviewed and it shall be done!

NHNT
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TheDayBeforeTomorrow
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Mon May 28, 2012 9:29 pm
TheDayBeforeTomorrow says... · Mon May 28, 2012 9:29 pm
Please could you review this? No one on the site has reviewed or commented yet. My parents say it's good, but then, they say that about everything. I really need an opinion. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95129 Thanks a ton!
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VampireSenshi
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Mon May 28, 2012 11:54 pm
VampireSenshi says... · Mon May 28, 2012 11:54 pm
When you have the time -
work.php?id=95605
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NIGHT is always watching...




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NeitherHereNorThere
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Tue May 29, 2012 1:33 am
NeitherHereNorThere says... · Tue May 29, 2012 1:33 am
TheDayBeforeTomorrow your review is complete! As is yours VampireSenshi512!

Keep them coming!

I am thoroughly enjoying myself!
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mithrim96
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Tue May 29, 2012 10:54 pm
mithrim96 says... · Tue May 29, 2012 10:54 pm
Hey, Mith here. Would you be able to review my poem, "When Sleep is Wake" at this (I think):

work.php?id=95057

It's been sorely neglected and I'd love some feedback. Please/Thank-you!
Keep writing for as long as it brings you joy!

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NeitherHereNorThere
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Wed May 30, 2012 3:06 am
NeitherHereNorThere says... · Wed May 30, 2012 3:06 am
Mith, you poem has been reviewed! It was fabulous, and others should read and review it!

Anyone else?

NHNT
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psudiname
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Thu May 31, 2012 6:56 pm
psudiname says... · Thu May 31, 2012 6:56 pm
could you review the first chapter of my novel?
work.php?id=95420
also, in the event that you want to keep reading, here is the second chapter
work.php?id=95532
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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roxyask
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Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:09 am
roxyask says... · Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:09 am
Hiya, I'd love to get some constructive feedbacl on this, if you had the time! work.php?id=95780 it is sad just to let you know! thanks anyway!! :)
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BethJeff
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Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:16 pm
BethJeff says... · Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:16 pm
Hey, I would really appreciate it if you could review my first chapter for me please!

work.php?id=95816

~Beth :D

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