Poem A Week

For the last week's casual poetry prompt contest you finally get a ~structure~ prompt! I am challenging you! to try your hand at writing a cinquain.

There's a nice article on YWS over here that explains two versions of cinquains - the syllable structure is always (2, 4, 6, 8, 2) for the five lines - and then there are different requirements for each line, that can be a little flexible as needed. Here's the version modeled after the American Cinquain form from Adelaide Crapsey's poetry:

Spoiler

Line 1 is a single Noun or Description of Title (can be modified with "the" or "these" etc.) (2 syllables)
Line 2 is a further Description of Line 1 or Title (4 syllables)
Line 3 is an Action (6 syllables)
Line 4 is a Feeling or Effect (8 syllables)
Line 5 is a Synonym of Line 1 or Synonym of Title (2 syllables)

The winner will get 500 points again!

To Participate:
> Poem should be posted by the end of the day May 1
> You can enter your poem, or give a link to it as a comment to this thread.
> You have to follow the syllable structure of a cinquain
> Have fun!