Hi everyone I set up this thread so that you post review requests for your work.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
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Review Requests
17 posts in this topic.
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The greenroom. Because there's 344 works in there right now.
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The Creativity Epidemic It's my first satire
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Fall Colors
I would love to write a superhero novel, so any critique on my superhero brainstorming is greatly welcomed =) -
The Remaining Survivors: Prologue
Someone already reviews this but I want more opinions. Someone said my work was cliché and scattered, which is great, but I don't know exactly what to do about it. -
this was i,m frist work i ever did on here, it got in the top4 short story of the month back in September hope you all enjoy it
Light and darkness • Young Writers Society -
Scratch my work, I already had someone review it.
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My newest poem about the old fable The Scorpion and The Frog. It's the first time I've ever done anything like it.
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I just wrote a prologue to a new story called The last survivors and would really like some feed back, thanks.
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I would love some reviews on my stuff, anything on my profile but especially "Rain" and "Deadly Hurt." Those are next on my list to re-edit
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I just attempted to write a short story (I usually just stick to poetry but I decided to give stories a go). If it is any good I might continue it, but I would love if someone could review it for me and let me know where my strengths and weaknesses in story-telling lie. Thanks in advance! The title of my story is The Beggar Boy
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I've got some things for people to review myself! First off is a short story that I'm probably going to enter in some sort of contest, so I would really appreciate the reviews.
Last Minute Gifts
And then there's my dragon-related story, The Giving Curse, that is also an (sort of) adaptation of Beauty and the Beast. Since it's dragon-related, I thought you guys would all love it.
The Giving Curse Chapter 1
The Giving Curse Chapter 2
The Giving Curse Chapter 3
The Giving Curse Chapter 4
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