Young Writers Society

The first part of a story I am writing, I honestly don't know how to describe it

Trapped in the fantasy realm, Liana must find a way out. Without getting killed and before the day of her high school graduation.

Uhm, it looked better when I had colors attached to certain parts, and also, it's not that much higher grade than the original, except maybe Chapter 4

Souls have been missing for years, but nobody has been able to figure out why. But archangel Hannah has found a clue that leads to a strange carnival…

Lily is sick of routine.

We all knew this reveal was happening let's be honest.

Casey’s best friend, Sarah, wants to film a YouTube challenge at a carnival. Casey didn’t know what to expect, but it certainly wasn’t this…

A piece of a bigger work centred around freedom.

Cont.

Feedback is always welcome. Please help me with some ideas on how to continue this

Continuation of the previous submission

A piece of a story focused on the idea of freedom. No prior reading is needed. Just want to see if this piece is any good.

A piece of a bigger work, that does not require prior reading.

A piece of a larger work, but no context is needed to understand it.

The beginning of the beginning. Three humans from another world encounter anomalies that shape their worldviews.