The moment she appeared she would not speak a word,
Silent
Dead
Those lightless eyes of another world
Reeking of this blankness, in her face, but a fragment
Bent, broken, smiles troken, glass shattered
Drowned in those onyx eyes where all light has faltered
I no longer meet her gaze where sadism has watered
I'm not sure how she got there, on my shelf, that porcelain doll
Her face had shattered in and no longer does her electronic heart toll
I would hide under the blankets and stay there till' the next day
Because whatever the position I was in, she'd find my gaze to my dismay
"I will get her out," I have always promised myself
But just a whisper, a sigh, and she'd be back there on my shelf
I could not take her out, but neither could I hide her view
Because I'd fall in in her eyes, in that void of blackness. Nothingness too
Where no moon glows, no sun twinkles, no shadows brew,
With those eyes as blank as a sheet of paper and as cold as morning dew
But I have always wondered whether she'll grow a beautiful heart after all that pain, but I really just want her gone
Because maybe she'll never be the same, but might be she'll remain no one
She'd giggle at night, whisper things, but in the morning- she screamed
The sobbing when dawn came but a wisp in a broken dream
But if you were to suddenly enter my room or simply turn on the lights
I would shut up just as quick, with my reflection on the shelf smiling me back
In this poem you focus a lot on the eyes, which isn't bad; but maybe you want to clear some of that out, try to make it more about the speaker, not the eyes. Also, you explain the eyes very well in the second stanza. Speaking of the second stanza the rhyme works well in the last two lines because of the flow.
This is an absolutely powerful poem filled with sorrow and emotion. It drew me in from the first sentence and kept me reading until the last. A very eerie, beautiful theme is conveyed and I think that the chilling descriptions you used in this poem fit very well. Overall, great job. I followed you!
Ooh, I'm totally getting Annabelle vibes from this! You should really be proud of this piece, it's amazing. First, I want to point out the formatting. It must have been a pain to get this formatted the way you wanted to, so kudos to you for that.
I saw one grammatical problem-
"I would shut up just as quick with my reflection smiling me back-"
'smiling me back' doesn't make a lot of sense? Maybe you can edit this so that it makes more sense. That's the one thing I don't get.
But, I want to point out some glows.
The imagery: I love how you describes how the doll looks and how the owner percieves her to be something more sinister than y'know, just a doll.
The language: rather mature, yet simple. Pretty well balanced ;D
I really enjoyed this piece!
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Here, you say sadism... which isn't technically a word lol (and I know you told me you're French in your past review) I think you meant something along the lines of "sadness"?I no longer meet her gaze where sadism has watered
This line is a bit confusing... maybe try clarifying it a bit because I'm not sure what you meant to say here xD.I would shut up just as quick with my reflection smiling me back
It's such a great description and you use a great choice of words! Overall, great job - just needed a bit of polishing upI could not take her out, but neither could I hide her view
Because I'd fall in in her eyes, in that void of blackness. Nothingness too
Where no moon glows, no sun twinkles, no shadows brew,
With those eyes as blank as a sheet of paper and as cold as morning dew
Keep it up and keep writing! 
it's about the tendency to find pleasure by inflicting pain about someone or something like that. But thanks for the review !
I'm not sure but.. is the doll herself ? (her reflection more precisely)
I'll review this later today.. this is just so.. touching
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