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Woah.

And I say that because... THIS IS POWERFUL!
Society molds children into adults in a really nasty way sometimes, and this, in all its simplicity, is a wonderful way to tell the tale. I really like it.
This is a good poem, and I like the meaning behind it, but I think it could use some work on the flow and beat. Hope this helps, sorry it's short.