Some day soon you will see,
Some day baby, you will turn around and realise,
You need me.
Even the strong cry,
Oceans will turn there tides,
But what you have done will eat at your insides,
Until the devils, in your heart fade and die.
In cruel harsh summers, you will turn around and sigh,
As you lie awake or cup her to your side,
Your lust over love has been lost in the drive,
The games that you played,
Are lost in lives which have wither and dried,
And as you walk past the park bench, where we shared our first kiss,
Regret fills your sole like a bottomless pit.
In your pitiful longing and lust full demise,
I complete my revenge with a sealed good bye,
In the heat of all passion I closed my eyes,
And I gave you my heart,
As you made up your lies,
Now I know how u wish to be loved by me,
Get used to the feeling, it will last eternity.
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Hey Siphiwe
Well I liked it.
Keep it coming, sis!
I like it. From what i understand it sounds like some one broke up with another because they lied about everything and now they want him/her back. NICE. Is you wrote this about yourself then I'm sorry, if not keep writing. You have good insperation.