Hello, I'm here to review this wonderful/creative poem. (Even though I'm a little late.)
I would like to say that I think that you are very creative because you thought of this from off the top of your head. If I wrote something like this it would take me hours to write it. You have to real talent for writing poetry if you just came up with something like this from the top of your head.
The only thing that was a little confusing for me was:
"ABC,123.
I didn't get how that had anything to do with the breaking, shattering, or it just being gone. The only thing that I could think of was you comparing that to a kindergarten child having to learn this stuff, and it being hard for them. (This is only my opinion, don't be mad.) If you were not going for that then I'm sorry for the miss understanding.
Other than me being confused, I really liked this. It was just really creative. I can actually tell that you are a very creative person, if you came up with this from the top of your head. The reader can actually relate to what you wrote(if it is relate able to them). Anyway, I really loved it, and I hope to read more of your creativity in the future. Keep up the good work!!
~Namjoon~
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