I have longed for this day,
The day you would find me.
You made me feel that you are with me,
Even though you were long gone.
You made me see things in a new light,
Things that I would have never seen before.
You made me feel like no other,
In a way I could be free.
This is why I have longed for this day,
The day you would find me for me.
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I'm not the best at poetry, but I'll try to be of some help. All my suggestions are in ().
I have longed for this day,
The day you would find me.
You made me feel that you are with me,
Even though you were long gone.
You made me see things in a(I keep wanting to skip the "a" but it sounds good with it.) new light,
Things that I would have never seen before.
You made me feel like no other,
In a way I could be free.
This is why I have longed for this day,
The day you would find me for me.
I probably wasn't much help, but I really have a herd time finding things to say sometimes. Good work.