What Life Means To Me?

The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR.
Woho! Massive font! OK, but aside from that here is my review.
Now, I saw nothing wrong grammar, punctuation-wise, or anything else, until I came to the part about the little kid. and you probably will get a lot more thoughts about this.
Although it is good to live life and not let others rule everything about how you live, the kid is still under his parent's and teachers leadership. to say that he is successful if he doesn't obey them doesn't seem right at all.
Now, I can't say whether you had punctuation problems or not, due to the fact that everything is so big and crammed together. but I do agree with your overall thoughts of life being a precious gift, and we can't let others rule everythig about us,.

Knight Dragon, here to review!

Oi, that font hurts my eyes. And all caps makes it really hard to focus on what you're saying. It's just ONE BIG BOLDED ESSAY IN WHICH ALL THE WORDS START TO BLEND TOGETHER BECAUSE THERE'S NO DISTINCTION AND EVEN THE PUNCTUATION, LIKE THIS, MIGHT START TO GET LOST. HAVE I MADE MY POINT?

Now, for the technical:
"You take birth" should be "you are born".

" have. For me,life is really a precious gift. This sounds cliche. But honestly,it" Spacing issues. You need spaces between "me" and "life" and "honestly" and "it." Also, why isn't there a comma after cliché? It would flow a lot better with one there.

"in activities that you love to do.", the "to do" is unnecessary and can be deleted.

"Lets say,there is this kid" should be "Let's say there is this kid."

Your example here of a child is really...flat. As in, is that really what you're trying to prove? That a child that laughs in spite of his discipline is to be championed? That comes across as an antihero type character, which is a major turn off.
On that same note, this quote: "After all,who has the time to live his life according to what others feel is right for him?" As is, verbatim, I'd agree. You shouldn't live your life according to expectations others hold against you. But this statement implies that living by the rules is less honorable than being evil because you feel it's right for you. So here's a little test scenario. Let's say I don't like grammar or spelling. I am now going to convey to you a message through writing: ";aklsdfjioawefjlaskdjfiadsjfasjf;ioj afkjklvnxzklvnaseklfnlifjzklfnaw efawl;ekjf klzxnv;kljwaefklj aklj sklfj ljlknfkasf klfnaeo fjksdml faweiof jklx" Does that make any sense at all? No, because I didn't write the "right" way. There are rules and regulations for a reason, and you must abide by those that are not subjective (especially a moral code).

At the end of this, you have completely failed to prove your point to me. All this is is one big blog post called an essay/article about what you believe, but you don't really explain why you believe it, or why others should agree with you. You simply state that you believe this. Your arguments and examples need a lot of work, and I hope you can better explain your arguments in future revision.

Hope this helps!

Sorry for the font guys...Copied and pasted it from my blog.Enjoy though!