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merciful -- animated

by chrysanthemumcentury



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Stickied -- Sat Feb 17, 2024 11:46 pm
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chrysanthemumcentury says...



inspired by @alliyah!




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Sun Mar 03, 2024 7:58 pm
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I love how this was animated. I especially love the part where 'laugh' changed colors. That really brought a lot of attention to the word. I like the part asking if they're a judge who's given you and unfair life sentence. It's a great metaphor. I really like the poem, and I'd love to read more like it!
You're doing amazing!
Keep up the good work!
Have a wonderful day/night!




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Sat Mar 02, 2024 6:06 pm
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Woahhhhh this is so creative!!! I wish I could do stuff like this but I’m helplessly dumb and I am so lazy(hehe). I love how the writing “feels” and how the word “laugh” at the end is shown in different colours and really emphasises how people will always think what they think, say what they want and gossip about who they want when they want. It’s really deep and emotional!




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Wed Feb 28, 2024 11:28 am
Isbah says...



It's so good!!




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Sat Feb 17, 2024 11:43 pm
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DevilBeMyDarling says...



Cool animation! I wish I could do stuff like this




chrysanthemumcentury says...


i just used canva! it's pretty simple :D



DevilBeMyDarling says...


canva! I'll keep that in mind lol



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Sat Feb 17, 2024 6:11 am
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AJW says...



Just wanted to say.. I loved the fact that for the most part this is monochromatic, while the only times we see any other colors are the Judges' gavel, and then again on your final word, "Laugh." It actually made me think of like a small echo in an empty room. Or courtroom if you will- I also like how it ended in black text as well.

Anyway, just thought that was neat!




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Fri Feb 16, 2024 11:23 pm
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chrysanthemumcentury says...



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