Young Writers Society

Trick or Write, curious mind

Rinisha is back here and ready to review 📚!

Buckle up, 'cause this is going to be a bumpy ride. I’m going to keep it short alright!✨

All in all

This party rocked, let's take a quick look!

I saw that you joined YWS quite recently, so welcome! Secondly, you have a knack for poetry, I must say. That was a very nice poem, great title too. The meaning of the poem is strong and really true to life. I love the vibe it gives you, it gives me a rainy day vibe.

Your title is very light-hearted and open-minded. It is as clear as a raindrop, which is what made me click on this poem in the first place. I am not a poet, but poems like this catch my eye. I would definitely recommend you to keep writing and improving your skills.

You could work on:✒️

Firstly, I love your title, but I think it would be much nicer without the THE in front of the words. It gives the title more feeling and emotion that way. The THe makes it seem a little to strict.

Secondly, I think you should try and work on making longer poems. This one is nice and short, but two or three more stanzas won't hurt anyone.

Be sure to check out…📔🔖

By @EsmerayaRose, @Liminality and @Starshipgirl

These authors have written some very nice poems, specialising in depth, structure and emotion. Not to mention realistic and fantastical themes. So if you can learn or get inspiration from anywhere, I would definitely check out some poems by them.

Have a nice day or night further! Keep writing! You are amazing!

Amazingly yours,
Rinisha – Be yourself and keep writing! 📖🎉