I like the descriptive words in the poem. How you describe the pure elation of true love. The first time with romance is always the sweetest, the most cherished. It is wished to last forever, without ever fail, without ever faltering.I have enjoyed reading this poem that you have written.I hope that you will have a very beautiful, lovely, and fantastic day and night. Goodbye for right at this moment.
loving your poetry style! <3"i bore you my soul in a jar / soaking in jasmine tea, no perfume, / disintegrating in thick devotion" <3 ^^ These lines especially hit!You've got great imagery and just the right succinctness. Would love to hear your rationale for not putting spaces in the title - is it to show an over-closeness?
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