reason number one: dirty knees are so unsanitary!
reason number two: cloudy skies, making everything so cold. How can Nate hike in such weather?
reason number three: hashtag five reasons to smile? But there's so many reasons to smile, how do you ever think he'll narrow it down to five?
reason number four: #whyIloveyws was a coverup for really being #whyIloveNate, and everyone knows it.
reason number five: SPEW pranks, always causing a ruckus!
reason number six: #fiveMOREreasonstosmile - Nate is afraid this trend will never cease.
reason number seven: you lost the game Nate.
reason number eight: all these little YWSers playing tag. You're "It" Nate!
reason number nine: so much jumping, it's chaos.
reason number ten: the fact that I jumped on the bandwagon for "Ten Reasons Why Nate is Afraid of..."
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Hello, it's Artemis28 here! Happy Review Day, my friend! Out of the Green Room you go! XD
Okay, first of all, I want to give you some praise. All of these reasons are pretty funny, even to people who don't know what you're talking about. (*cough* me *cough*) They're just so random, it's hilarious.
Now onto the nitpicks! In reason number two, you're wondering how Nate can hike in cloudy sky weather. Wait, hold on a minute, where is he hiking to in the first place? I think it would be a little more humorous if you added in where he was going. Like, maybe, hiking to The Tavern forum? Or, perhaps, the chatroom? Something like that.
Also, in reason number five, what are SPEW pranks? People who read this might have no idea what SPEW is. I, even being on YWS for over a year, have no clue what you mean. I apologize for my ignorance, but I think you could explain it in that reason. Maybe, spell out what SPEW means?
Ah, reason number ten explain the title the most! Overall, I really like the reasons, and how you made me laugh. (Well, not really, but my internal self did.) You did a good job on this!
-Artemis28, for... Ten Reasons. O.o
haha! I don' even know what SPEW means, but ancient people on YWS told me to include it xD
thanks!
Ancient people? Wow. XD You're welcome!
Hello, steampowered here for a review this fine Review Day! OK, it’s probably not going to be a review, but I’m going to mark it as a review anyway.
Can I just say that I, too, am really scared of bandwagons? I mean, I logged on to YWS to do a bit of reviewing, to help clear out the works that had accumulated in the Green Room, and do you know what I found?
Ten Reasons Why Nate’s Afraid Of Storybooks, Ten Reasons Why Nate Is Afraid Of “10 Reasons Nate Is Afraid Of” something about cellphones, something by Stegosaurus about dinosaurs – and now I find this! Even one of the Review Day teams is called “Ten Reasons”. There is literally no escape from the bandwagon, and that’s what makes me afraid.
The power of the creative mob has spoken.If Nate didn’t have a phobia of YWS before all this kicked off, he sure will now.
In all serious though, this is fantastic and I really enjoyed it. I don’t have anything bad to say about it
apart from the cough cough whole bandwagon thingand to be honest, I’ve taken part in a fair few of these things myself (because everyone kept TAGGING me to do #fivereasonstosmile )YWS scares me.
That is all I have to say.
Goodbye.