Author's note: Hello! Please try to criticize this strongly. I'll be performing it in a talent show, and I want to shape it up to be its best. Thank you!! Hope you enjoy. :)
Bittersweet coffee cacophony-
caffeine runs through my veins-
fueling fibers, fingertips, toes, brain.
My lovely lady caffeine
sends me spiraling and
pulls me back again.
She lifts me up, but I only drop further:
Low, low, lost in her caramel curls.
Her smooth, mocha tar smells enticing.
She strangles me- rules me.
Her comfort is deceitful: she
leaves me unnerved and paranoid.
Yet, I run back again, desperate,
begging for her presence.
My queen, the lovely lady caffeine.