Hello, I am here to review this beautiful poem of yours.
If you also speak another language, hola.
Okay so my favorite stanza was the last stanza. As my favorite line was the last line, by the way that is a great way to end a story or a poem oh, so you did a great job on that.
Okay so now let's talk about the second last stanza. Okay so in the first line of the second last stanza, I really didn't think you needed that Dash. In fact that Dash made me kind of confused. Maybe if you would explain to me what that means that would be great.
Well that's all I needed to talk about because your poem or story is so beautiful and great. It has well punctuation and I really like the flow of it. great job.
Alsooh, there is this one big giant word I use to describe beautiful essence of poems like this.
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious...
It means that this poem is so amazing, great job. Keep writing and reading.
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