Pain.

by chynelk5
  • October 28, 2010
  • Poetry
  • Other
  • The stuff that escapes my brain, into my pen, onto the page.
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I jest at scars that bear sweet wounds.

The wounds they seep, they seep.

Mine heart in broken camouflage.

My heart it weeps, it weeps.

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chynelk5
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chynelk5 commented · Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:33 pm

Leonie,
Thank you :]
Chynel.

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LeonieLacey
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LeonieLacey wrote a review · Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:11 pm

Haha, i told you this was enough to make a poem! God, well i guess i should review this poem seeing as i'm the first one reading it. But i can't. It's too good. I'm sorry, i'm useless, but this is beyond me, it's stunning.
Wow, your poetry is soooo deep, and it's right from the heart, you can feel that when you're reading it.
It's simple, yet meaningful. Short and sweet. It's oozing emotion. There's not much more i can say. Just beautiful.
Well done!!!!
leonie.



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