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πŸ’¬β†”οΈπŸŒ³βž•πŸŒ±

by chrysanthemumcentury


🌍 πŸ”Ž πŸ—Ί πŸ”Ž β›°πŸ”πŸ—» πŸ”Ž 🏞 πŸ”Ž πŸŒ³πŸŒ³πŸŒ³πŸŒ³πŸ”Ž 🌱🌳🐌🐦🦊

πŸŒ±πŸ’¬ (🌳πŸ’ͺ, ☝️ 🌱🚫πŸ’ͺ. ?)

πŸŒ³πŸ’¬ (🚫🚫🚫, 🌱πŸ’ͺ, 🌳πŸ’ͺ. 🌱🚫🌳.)

🌱, ?, πŸ’¬ (πŸŒ±πŸ”Žβœ…. 🌱πŸ’ͺ?)

πŸŒ³πŸ’¬ (🌍🌎🌏 πŸ’ͺ. 🦊πŸ’ͺ, 🐦πŸ’ͺ, 🦠, 🐞, 🐝, 🐌, πŸ’ͺ. πŸŒ±πŸ”Ž, βœ…. ☝️, πŸŒ±βœ…πŸŒ±βž‘οΈπŸͺ΄βž‘️🌳. βž• 🌱➑️πŸͺ΄βž‘️🌳 πŸ’ͺ.)

πŸŒ±πŸ’­. βž•πŸ’­. βž•πŸ’­. πŸŒ±πŸ’­, πŸŒ±πŸ’¬ (β˜οΈπŸŒ±βž•πŸžβž•πŸŒβž•πŸβž•πŸ¦ βž•πŸ¦Šβž•πŸŒ³βž•πŸ¦ πŸ’ͺ, πŸŒ±πŸ’­πŸ˜₯βž•πŸš«πŸ’ͺ?)

🌳⏸. πŸŒ³πŸ’­, βž‘οΈπŸŒ³πŸ’¬ (πŸŒ³πŸš«πŸ’¬πŸŒ±. 🌱➑️🌱, 🌳➑️🌳. πŸŒ³πŸš«πŸ’­β†”οΈπŸŒ±πŸ’­. 🌱, 🚫🌳, 🚫🦊, 🚫🌍, βœ…πŸ’¬ (πŸŒ±πŸ’­πŸ˜₯βž•πŸš«πŸ’ͺ). ☝️, 🌱➑️πŸ’ͺπŸ’­βž•πŸ’ͺπŸ’¬. πŸŒ³πŸ’­πŸŒ±πŸ‘πŸ’¬(πŸŒ±πŸ’­πŸ˜₯βž•πŸš«πŸ’ͺ). 🌱➑️πŸ’ͺ.)

πŸŒ±πŸ’­, πŸŒ±πŸš«πŸ’¬. πŸ•›πŸ•πŸ•‘πŸ•’πŸ•ž (β˜€οΈβž‘οΈπŸŒ•), βž•πŸŒ±πŸ’­ (🌍➑️?, βž•πŸŒ±βž‘πŸ”Žβœ…. ☝️🌱➑️πŸ’ͺ. πŸŒ±βœ…πŸŒ±βž‘οΈπŸͺ΄βž‘️🌳.)

A/N: reviewers, i'd love to hear your interpretation! i can post the real "text version" if you'd like, but first i want to hear what your impression on this poem is. what does it mean? who is talking? what are they talking about?


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Wed Oct 16, 2024 3:14 am
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Spoiler! :
A poem translation of this story

The Sapling's Growth

No one sees me from space
Nor continent, nor country, not the large place
Not from high mountain tops nor busy streets.
But search deeper and lower the and the finest of trees.

I am not strong with my flimsy leaves,
But you stand tall against the wildest breeze.
No you are just as mighty as me.
We hold to our nature, though different we be.

The earth is mighty with its animals and birds,
From insects, to plants, to the wildest herds.
You, oh sapling, fit among these things.
Your roots will stem legs, and your branches wings.

Yes the earth has great plants and creatures,
But how does my life compare to its features?
The trees leaves stood still to ponder this question.
What could he say to make of this lesson?

How do I talk, oh little sapling?
You talk like you've lived and I am not grappling.
Sprouts are sprouts, and trees are trees,
A fox wasn't meant to be a tree, nor a sapling be me.

You see, oh sapling, nature made us differently.
This does not make you any weaker than me.
You heart is strong, and your thoughts worth while.
I enjoy speaking with you, you make me smile.

But still the sapling did not understand,
How his little self had a part in this plan.
He wanted to have the strength of the oak.
So he waited and waited until he awoke.

Mother nature looked closely and what did she see?
Her confused little sapling finally at peace.
He patiently waited until on day he'd joke,
About when he doubted the words of that oak.

Also, I loved interpreting this so much. A funny image popped in my head that this is what the scripts of silent films look like.




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Wed Oct 16, 2024 2:19 am
AdphaeXD says...



I presume the story goes something like this here.

Spoiler! :
We zoom in on our scene: a forest inside a mountain range.
A seedling states, "A tree is strong, but a seedling isn't."
A tree responds, "No, no, no. A seedling is strong, and a tree is strong, but in different ways."
The seedling, confused, asks, "A seedling is small; how is a seedling strong?"
The tree answers, "Everything is strong. A seedling is small, but it will one day become a tree, Thus, it is strong."
The seedling thinks. After a long pondering over what the tree said, the seedling asks, "Yes, a seedling will become a tree, but how does that make it strong?"
The tree does something with two barsβ€”probably thinking. Suddenly, the tree answers: "A tree cannot think like a seedling. A seedling is a seedling and a tree is a tree. A tree and a seedling think differently, since a seedling is not a tree, nor anything else. A seedling may not appear to be strong; however, a seedling is strong in the way it thinks."

The seedling reflects. It reflects for a long timeβ€”it is in no rush, as it is a seedling. The seedling replies to the tree, "Compared to the whole world, a seedling is small. All the same, a seedling is strong, because it will become a tree."


I don't get the moral lol.




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Hello! AnotherCrowInRow (aka Kay) is here with a review. And I am extremely looking forward to this one, as it caught my eye as soon as I saw it in the Green Room.We've got a bunch of emojis here, and since I'm a little too obsessed with ciphers and decryption, I got down to business!
And I'll admit it. We have plenty of time to review and sleep, so I haven't come to any big conclusions. Well, I understood this from the hieroglyphs of the twenty-first century:

🌍 πŸ”Ž πŸ—Ί πŸ”Ž β›°πŸ”πŸ—» πŸ”Ž 🏞 πŸ”Ž πŸŒ³πŸŒ³πŸŒ³πŸŒ³πŸ”Ž 🌱🌳🐌🐦🦊

In this part, you invite the reader to take a closer look at our planet. For individual mountains, hills, etc. Let us see the forests and their inhabitants with our inner vision? That fits for me.
πŸŒ±πŸ’¬ (🌳πŸ’ͺ, ☝️ 🌱🚫πŸ’ͺ. ?)

Huh. I would say that there is a dialogue between tree and itΒ΄s seed. Tree is giving seed some tips and questions it, if it will be strong enought? Probably.
πŸŒ³πŸ’¬ (🚫🚫🚫, 🌱πŸ’ͺ, 🌳πŸ’ͺ. 🌱🚫🌳.)

🌱, ?, πŸ’¬ (πŸŒ±πŸ”Žβœ…. 🌱πŸ’ͺ?)

πŸŒ³πŸ’¬ (🌍🌎🌏 πŸ’ͺ. 🦊πŸ’ͺ, 🐦πŸ’ͺ, 🦠, 🐞, 🐝, 🐌, πŸ’ͺ. πŸŒ±πŸ”Ž, βœ…. ☝️, πŸŒ±βœ…πŸŒ±βž‘οΈπŸͺ΄βž‘️🌳. βž• 🌱➑️πŸͺ΄βž‘️🌳 πŸ’ͺ.)

πŸŒ±πŸ’­. βž•πŸ’­. βž•πŸ’­. πŸŒ±πŸ’­, πŸŒ±πŸ’¬ (β˜οΈπŸŒ±βž•πŸžβž•πŸŒβž•πŸβž•πŸ¦ βž•πŸ¦Šβž•πŸŒ³βž•πŸ¦ πŸ’ͺ, πŸŒ±πŸ’­πŸ˜₯βž•πŸš«πŸ’ͺ?)

🌳⏸. πŸŒ³πŸ’­, βž‘οΈπŸŒ³πŸ’¬ (πŸŒ³πŸš«πŸ’¬πŸŒ±. 🌱➑️🌱, 🌳➑️🌳. πŸŒ³πŸš«πŸ’­β†”οΈπŸŒ±πŸ’­. 🌱, 🚫🌳, 🚫🦊, 🚫🌍, βœ…πŸ’¬ (πŸŒ±πŸ’­πŸ˜₯βž•πŸš«πŸ’ͺ). ☝️, 🌱➑️πŸ’ͺπŸ’­βž•πŸ’ͺπŸ’¬. πŸŒ³πŸ’­πŸŒ±πŸ‘πŸ’¬(πŸŒ±πŸ’­πŸ˜₯βž•πŸš«πŸ’ͺ). 🌱➑️πŸ’ͺ.)

πŸŒ±πŸ’­, πŸŒ±πŸš«πŸ’¬. πŸ•›πŸ•πŸ•‘πŸ•’πŸ•ž (β˜€οΈβž‘οΈπŸŒ•), βž•πŸŒ±πŸ’­ (🌍➑️?, βž•πŸŒ±βž‘πŸ”Žβœ…. ☝️🌱➑️πŸ’ͺ. πŸŒ±βœ…πŸŒ±βž‘οΈπŸͺ΄βž‘️🌳.)


I started to get very lost in this part. Well, at least I put together my interpretation of the complete ending. Something about how a seed over a very long time (I'm guessing based on the number of clock face emojis) gradually grew into a big and healthy tree.
Overall, I found your idea very original! They say that you have to be able to decipher the poems, but you took it literally and I like that a lot! And I'd definitely like to read the text version sometime, since I'm obviously not good at reading emojis at all.

Have a nice rest of day/night/whatever!




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I gotta be honest, chrysanthemumcentury, I had no clue what to make of this when I first saw it! This was like reading an ancient mesopotamian slab. But I must commend you with forming a narrative using emojis! From what I could figure out, the Seed has some self-esteem issues to which they tell the Tree. The Seed either does not think they are strong/important (I'm inclined to think important more than strong) and it become this debate between the two, how the Seed compares itself to other living beings (animals) while the Tree tells them about how one day they'll turn into a tree. This works and the Seed remains silent, waiting for a really long time while pondering. Until one day it excepts their own importance and soon after, they become the Tree.





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