I rather like it. It offers many perspectives and interpretations, and the language is appropriate and sophisticated at some parts, though also simple enough for it to seem quite casual, so the style greatly fits with the theme. It is romantic, but not in a traditional format, not optimistic and full of grandeur, but almost unified against an unknown puissant enemy that is the loneliness, from my interpretation. Though it seems very grim towards the end, implying that the narrator isn't happy with the relationship, and is uncomfortable, but sees no alternative then to provide a false comfort. In the end the narrator "peels" them off austerely and goes away, without one to comfort them, which is somewhat selfless to me. I don't know if a review is meant to have an interpretation, but I think that you did a marvellous job, for I think that literature is successful if it provides many interpretations, or a new interpretation to each individual. If you show someone something, they may or may not be inclined to favour it, but if you show them something and they see something they relate to, that they create with their subconscious, then it will impact them so much more; as your work did with me.
In short, great work.
Points: 724
Reviews: 6
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