Let me tell you
A story so grand
Of an alpaca
And his lovely band.
*
He was an alpaca
With a sweet smile
He is color purple,
Which is a unique style.
*
His name is Anchor.
The clever leader
Of a group of creatures
That grew bigger and bigger.
*
Why bigger you ask?
This group shares three things
They love to eat, hang out,
And utter nonsense things.
*
Back to Anchor,
He is sensible,
Educated, smart, and
All around lovable.
*
Anchor and his friends
Go on adventures
Sharing memories that
Last forever, for sure.
*
Their journeys are
Fantastical, magical,
Ethereal, unreal and
Most of all, unforgettable.
*
Here’s something Anchor
Wants to tell you.
Please do mind that
I may not understand, too.
***
Anchor:
HMMMMM? HMMM! PWAAA
HMMMMMM HM HMMMMM HMMM
PWAAAAA (spits at another intruding alpaca) HM HM HM
HMMMMMMM PWA
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this was a clever witty poem. I loved it. I think your prose flow perfectly. Good Job!
Thank you for your review!
Hello there @alpacaboss I like your story and most of all I like Anchor. Absolutely love this poem. The whole you know -HMMM? HMMM!- thing is amazing. I'm glad someone wrote something about an alpaca! You should do another poem about anchor I would love to see more!
-Ellie
Thank you @EliseEllie!
And welcome to YWS!
Hello there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment about lovely Anchor! Finally, a poem about a alpaca of @alpacaboss. He's so cute c:
Now back to the poem. Anchor seems like a good alpaca. Great personality and has great friends too. One day, will you show his friends too? At first, you mention how Anchor is a great leader and why he is a alpaca. Kind of an epic entry! Good job! His group of friends gets bigger and bigger because our lovely Anchor's clever personality. This is my favorite verse:
"Anchor:
HMMMMM? HMMM! PWAAA
HMMMMMM HM HMMMMM HMMM
PWAAAAA (spits at another intruding alpaca) HM HM HM
HMMMMMMM PWA"
Over all, there were some grammatical errors but great poem. Keep on writing [about Anchor]! Have a lovely day/night!
Thank you for your review!
Maybe I may write more about Anchor and his gang of unlikely friends hehe
Maybe I'll look forward to those writings about him and his gang hehe c:
You're welcome!
It's here!! The poem about THE ALPACA! *grins* And this was just as cute as was promised.
Are they in your herd back at home?
I can totally picture a group of purple-blue alpacas hanging out together, eating and mumbling pure nonsense. How cute. It reminds me of those little brown bears in Star Wars. Only, these alpacas I picture as being a little less vicious.
Hm. I don't think I quite understood the hmmms and mmms and all the rest. But I'm sure it was positive...(maybe) or perhaps it was an angry hmmm warning the alpaca near by to move on. Either way, I think I just found a new favorite animal.
And as always, I love your alpacas featured above.
Overall, cute snippet here! Mmmm hmmmm. Yeah. Whatever that means.
-Kaia
YAY glad you like them
1. yes, the purple alpaca is my dear stuffed toy alpaca. he's amazing
2. the MMM's and HMM's are the sounds of an alpaca. DO I understand what they mean? Most of the time....no
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Aw, that's so sweet! (Does he have a cousin I could steal away to be mine?)
Very clever!!
I figured those were alpaca noises.
Sure!
Thanks!
for the cousin, I'll have to ask Anchor
knowing him, Anchor might start rambling in his language about shipping and stuff though HAHAHA
Hm...yeah. I'm not sure we could figure out how much we're supposed to pay.... Oh well...XD
HAHHA I am glad this poem made you interested in alpacas though lol
Have a great day/night/afternoon!
Yeah.
You, too!
I am very pleased to see this piece in the lit center and looking forward to reviewing it!
yay thank you!