How to heal:
Step One -
∙ Listen to the music that
makes you happy,
perhaps the theme
of the girl you would be.
Step Two -
∙ Your favorite character(s)
love you and appreciate you
for who YOU are.
They'll be in your heart.
Step Three -
∙ Cry, cry, cry, cry,
and cry some more.
Then remember all the noises
All the words you love.
Step Four -
∙ Pokéball opening. Portal gun whoosh-warp. Firebending.
Owl City. The Numbers 3, 12, 13, and 15.
"Pi-ka!" And and all TARDIS noises.
The way GLaDOS speaks, the twang in someone's voice.
Step Five -
∙ Remember that you and I
are loved, cherished, appreciated,
maybe not by real people,
but by the people we love, cherish, and appreciate
too.
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Hello , Iamawriter here for a review.
First off, the title is confusing to me. Throughout the poem there is no mention of a presentation of any sort that I can see. Also, the way it is worded is too slang-like to me. Not appropriate for the poem in my opinion. The theme seems to be consistent but doesn't flow to me. If you work on your flow I might understand the piece better.
I wish I was more helpful.
I hope you have a great day and never stop writing.
Sincerely, Iamawriter
There are some spelling errors. There are random capitalization, and the title has the capital thing.
I always put the best part tha I like. So here it is.
" How to heal:
Step One -
∙ Listen to the music that
makes you happy,
perhaps the theme
of the girl you would be.
Step Two -
∙ Your favorite character(s)
love you and appreciate you
for who YOU are.
They'll be in your heart.
Step Three -
∙ Cry, cry, cry, cry,
and cry some more.
Then remember all the noises
All the words you love."
But it is s good. Great job on it.
When you have those you cherish in your heart, whether flesh and blood, or fictional, you can overcome any obstacle.
That was a great presentation! You got everyone into it.
Step Five made me smile. It touched me so hard my heart is beating like thunder. I will definitely remember that when I give my speech, because I know all my Pokemon friends(yes, even Team Rocket and Guzma) Lord of the Rings friends, My Little Pony friends, etc...
Don't beat yourself up about your mistakes. Pick yourself up because you will learn and fix them!
Guzma is just like,,
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