Hello, Steggy here for a short review!
I would first like to say, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here and if you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask. ^^
I like this poem because you don't spell out what the craft you hold for the reader but instead give little hints to what it may be. There are some poems like this one but you seem to write about your own experience and often times poems lack that. When I read the first stanza, I was intrigued as to what you were talking about because you seem to say that the craft you make is your life. Another thing I like about your poem is the rhyming scheme. To me, the rhyming scheme is like description, it gives a beat for the reader to have when they read a poem. Although you have a faint rhyming scheme, it would be nice to have it throughout the entire poem or else it will feel jolted.
There are those who express themselves with paint,
but I must confess I don't possess that trait.
to tell a story using images, without a single blemish
is proof of truth and diligence, from beginning to the finish.
When you begin a new stanza after a period, you should capitalize the next stanza after that. Most poems, as for the ones I've read, have a consistency with their capitalization, like for example, if you wanted to have a lower case poem then have lower case letters at the beginning of each line. If you want a capitalize letters at the beginning, then you would do the same with lower case letters.
I wreite about my feelings or I talk about my agony.
wreite should be write.
Overall, I would suggest rereading your work before publishing. It's always good to have your eyes overlook your work, to figure out spelling mistakes or even finding the wrong words and replacing them with the correct ones. It's always a blessing for your future self when they come back to this poem and rewrite it.
If you have any questions, let me know!
Steggy
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