I'm curious, who's the boy?This is such a pretty poem.
Hi there, Ellie-Mae here for a quick review! Wishing you a happy day/evening/morning/night/whatever is applicable to your part of the world! First off, please remember that my reviews are my own opinions I’ll give honest feedback, but nothing at all is intended to hurt or discourage you in any way at all! <3 So, without waiting any longer, let’s get right into it and digest the spectabulous piece of literary work!this is awesome! it sounds so pretty and it is beautifully written. th last sentence is definitely an eye-catcher!"or maybe ill listen to enjoy the silence instead"this has such a mysterious feeling to it and that makes is absolutely extraordinary:)Ellie-mae
Hey Silver! Incoming review!Here we got some great poetry. I hope this review will do it some justice! On with the review!!I'll start out with critique. I have a slight problem with the punctuation, not in the way that it was used, but why it was used. Most of what you have are complete thoughts, but I feel like they don't really need to be separated into "sentences." Like how thoughts run through your head when you're half asleep in the passenger seat on a long car ride. They just continue with no end in sight.
here, the river moves on, the trees do not.
and imagine you're to my side if i turn my head.
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