Young Writers Society

Hey friend, I am back to leave another review for one of your fantastic poems! One thing I love about your poetry is that you always make it so unique and beautiful. I noticed that this was your first poem for NaPo, plus the vegetable theme is amazing. Long live Young Vegetable Society!! Let's jump right into the review:

But If you’ve ever wondered
what it takes to be a veggie, for goodness’
sake, just follow these tip-tap steps
to live as they say; a ve-ge-table-s life

Don’t let them define your purpose
and your in-dom-it-able
-ness. Show no fear and
shout: “I’m a veggie, hear me, and I’m
vegging all about!”

This poem is like a funny little story about veggies! It talks about how silly it would be to be a vegetable and gives tips on how to live like one. It's kind of like a make-believe adventure into the world of carrots and cabbage!

The poem says veggies don't need arms or legs because they can just stretch out to the sky and soak up the sunshine. And when it rains, they can let the raindrops kiss their leaves and dance around. But watch out for bugs—they can be pesky!

It's a fun poem that makes you think about veggies in a whole new way. So, if you ever feel a little bit different, just think about lettuce and greens, and you'll feel like a veggie too!

Overall a solid fun and weird poem

Hi names 22Midnight
hope your doing well, let's get into it! this review's going to be playful one hope that's okay

First Impression: yep this is totally to go with the resent theme, cool i'm interested to see what you came up with for this veggie outbreak.

To be a veggie is

quite absurd, a pretty
little oddity of life
Oh carrots and cabbage, it’s a dream

But If you’ve ever wondered
what it takes to be a veggie, for goodness’
sake, just follow these tip-tap steps
to live as they say; a ve-ge-table-s life

No need for arms or legs, you see
Or stifles of worry, sadness and grief
For they darken the colour of your red
Tomato cheeks

Green umbrella, you should stretch out to the sky instead
To catch the sunlight as you stand tall
And free

Let the raindrops kiss your leaves
Twirl and spin, let the drops fall down
No shoes or fancy jackets around for snails,
Those teeny-tiny fashion thieves
That stroll above your wiggling roots
In the coldness of a brown coat

Though, beware of those pesky bugs and
their devious shenanigans
Don’t let them define your purpose
and your in-dom-it-able
-ness. Show no fear and
shout: “I’m a veggie, hear me, and I’m
vegging all about!”

There you have it, your veggie degree
for thinking about those oddities too
So if you’re feeling a bit pe-
Cu-lair, think of all and lettuce and greens
And soon enough, a veggie you’ll be!