I like this poem a lot. And nice visual, by the way. The only real complaint I have is that you repeated crumbling. It just seemed like a mistake, unless you wanted it there, I dunno. I would take the second crumbling out, though. Other than that, great job! It is so true how a simple structure like a lighthouse endures so much but yet still stays standing.
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