This is a very descriptive and imagery-heavy poem, which I absolutely love! I think poetry is the most powerful when it can paint images within the reader's mind and this is one good example of that.
I particularly like the middle stanza, in which you describe the sensation of snow falling and "creeping along the ground". This, to me, makes this a very festive and winter-y poem, which goes hand in hand with the feelings of nostalgia and warmth, ironically enough.
You evoke a sense of calmness and comfort that I'm assuming are felt when you return home from a long stay away. I would suggest maybe adding an additional stanza to go deeper into maybe a happy memory or two from a past time that you were home? That way we could get to see how the narrator reflects upon his/her time in this particular house that they're returning to. Just a suggestion to lengthen and add a bit more detail to the poem!
I also found a small mistake in the last stanza; I believe you meant to write "comforted" or "comfortable" in the third to last line. The way it's written now creates a verb incongruency that kind of interrupts the reader's rhythm, but aside from this mistake, I see no issue with the lovely poem you've written for us here.
Write on!!
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