Wow! This is amazing! Listening to this poem allows people to connect to your thoughts and illustrates a clear and vivid message for your readers. To help go over this wonderful poem, I have written a pros and cons list.
Pros: Your poem has a lot of emotion behind each word, and helps readers make personal connections. Everything seems to be formatted well, and your vocabulary helps keep a consistant flow.
Cons: There really isn't any advice I can give you right now. Maybe next time you could possbly lengthen your size of the poem, but you don't really need to. That was just a suggestion of course.
Overall, I think you did amazing! Hopefully my review was helpful to you, and I expect to see more of your astonishing writing in the future!
Points: 25
Reviews: 30
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