This is 1 of 5 songs (yes I commissioned music for them) that I will be posting. The next 4 will arrive October 24th! Link for this music video is down below :)
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Leaves blush like smitten beaus.
Hot cider steams your little nose.
Skies turn dark with rapid haste.
Wind paints red your ruddy face.
No better season in the land
Sweater weather hand-in-hand.
Bonfires speckle fresh-ploughed fields
Apples picked, are carved and peeled.
Seek relief from Summer’s burns
Smile as the color turns.
Because
it’s finally fall
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Pumpkins plumpen, gourds galore!
Quick! Check the football halftime score.
Button up your fluffy flannels,
Lace your boots, no time for sandals.
No better season in the land
Sweater weather hand-in-hand.
Bonfires speckle fresh-ploughed fields
Apples picked, are carved and peeled.
Seek relief from Summer’s burns
Smile as the color turns.
Because
it’s finally fall!
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Candles sizzle autumn smells,
Witches boil bubbling spells,
Turkeys roast to tender taste.
Mashed potatoes mushed to paste.
No better season in the land
Sweater weather hand-in-hand.
Bonfires speckle fresh-ploughed fields
Apples picked, are carved and peeled.
Seek relief from Summer’s burns
Smile as the color turns.
Because
it’s finally fall!
It's Finally Fall!
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Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!
Shalt we commence with the morbid S’more?
Top Graham Cracker - This song is about the wonderful glories of Fall and how it brings a pumpkin-spice light to many lives!
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I have no recommendations to make as of right now, but if you would like to edit this, then you may.
Chocolate Bar - I love all the references to Fall with Halloween, leaves, and football! I also like the way you wrote the lyrics, like with the pumpkins and gourds. This seems like the type of poem that any one of any age could sing as a family. Also, the emojis! They add a Fall charm to the song!!
Closing Graham Cracker - Overall, a very Falltastic Fall song to read in the Winter! I eagerly await 2026’s Fall and so with that, I wish you…
A Happy New Fear!!
Haha, right on time for winter starting, let me read your poem about autumn 😊
Might either be the way you sung it or bc I just choose to imagine this is abt soccer and so have a taste of home in this =DCorrection, your song abt autumn!
Have listened to the yt video too 😊
Hard disagree on the best season btw. You can keep your sad, leaf-less trees, while I revel in summer’s burns =D
But I do like all the lines abt the good things that autumn brings. It does even awaken some … fall-y feelings in me. Also like the way you emphasise “It’s finally fall” in the video.
Very, very cute song :3
For some reason I really like this rhyme:
This is pretty good. It really put me in mind of the fall songs I’d have to learn in elementary school.
I liked the thanksgiving lines. Thanksgiving is pretty cool.
I couldn’t get the video to play but I’m sure it’s pretty good as well.
Overall it’s pretty good. Good job!
The song is so beautiful!!! This is so wonderfully written and definitely a wonderful introduction into your fall pieces. I love it.
Thaaaaank you i cannot.wait! They only get better