Hey Lumi, here for a Review Day review,
Positives:Such a unique piece. I usually don't like prose style poetry because it feels blocky and not very clean, but this one's great!
[quote]I dust the face of an unnamed knockout punch, wonder who was prouder of the moment: the boxer, or the last American photographer who didn't need a stage."
This, for me, really just sums up the entire feel of being a boxer, or even just living during the times of the Great Depression. Rocky and Cinderella Man come to mind. But the photographer is a really nice touch. It's such an insignificant and useless character, yet they are the ones that take that one snapshot the literally changes the world. I almost feel like you've brought the rookie photo taking fool out of his obscure existence and dropped him into a world where he gets to duke it out with the best of them. It was cool to watch.
Negatives:To be honest, there's nothing negative about this one. Being that you've done something so original, it's hard to say anything against it, unless you were to ask specific questions about what I think. Job well done, in my opinion.
I give it:
Points: 6987
Reviews: 117
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