
Hello, how may I help you?" the woman at the counter asked.
"We wan see da babies!" my older sister almost shouted in a baby voice.
"We wan kiss 'em!" her friend, Amanda, added.
The
woman smiled and told the three of us to head through the door to sign
in. We could catch glimpses of fur through the fences as we came out
into the small yard. We waited behind a crowd of people waiting to buy
small cups of hot dogs or to sign up of interactions. Native American
music played in the speaker over head as we came to the small table. As I
waited to sign my name on the waiver, I glanced past the woman signing
us in and met the bright orange eyes of Iya through the fence. She
stared at me for a few moments before trotting back out of sight. By
then it was my turn to sign before we all huddled next to gate and
waited eagerly.
"None of you have on any dangling earrings, right?
Those have to come off," the guide told us. One woman scrambled to
quickly remover hers. Then to my sister and her friend she said, "Can
you take those nose studs out?" They both shook their heads, not able to
remove them at that moment. "Well, be careful or they will remove them
for you."
Finally it was time to go in. We moved closer to the
enclosure and now we had a good look at the pack. The paced near the
gate, ready to greet us. Two staff members went in before us, and then
the third began telling us, "go, go, go," and we all hurried into the
enclosure while the other staff members were distracting the three
wolves.
The free staff member led os to a round tub turned
upside-down tub and told us to gather around it. An instant later they
were there. Iya was the first to jump up onto the tub, making a full
circle as she gave a big wet kiss to everyone gathered around. When she
came to me I was almost knocked over as her large paws came down on my
shoulders and she pressed her sharp snout into my face. I put my arms
out to stroke her sleek black fur while supporting her so that she
didn't fall off of the tub in her excitement. She she began to make
another circle Nanouk jumped up. He was bigger and broader than her with
brownish black fur and yellow eyes. He also made his rounds kissing and
jumping on everyone. Soon Iya was back to me and she threw her head up
and threw her chest into mine. I could hear Amanda on the other side of
me saying 'da babies!' as Nanouk gave her lots of kisses.
Last was
Dakota, the picture-perfect wolf. His fur was the standard gray and
white and his paws here like two huge fists. He did not come up onto the
tub though. Instead and simply watched for awhile.
Then suddenly
Iya jumped off and hopped onto a bid block of wood. we all gathered
around her and watched as one of the staff members got her to roll over
onto her back and gave her a wonderful tummy rub. Then we were free to
move about the enclosure, tripping over deer legs and piles of fur as we
went. I stood by Nonouk who stood on his own wood block. He began
kissing me, leaving great rivers of sticky saliva on my face. I felt
myself growing nervous as I began feeling his teethe on my head as he
fit my entire head in his mouth. Laughing, I backed away from him as one
of the staff members came of put him on his back to assert her dominance
and scold him for gnawing on my head. A few moments later she brought
out a peppermint and handed it to him. Iya saw and quickly jumped up and
snatched it from him. Then she spat it out, only interested in keeping
it away from Nanouk. She was the smallest of the three, but she was the
alpha wold of their small pack. The staff member pointed to Iya's ears,
which were small and curled. "Her brothers chewed on her ears when they
were pups," she explained, "they never grew back right." With her
rounded ears and sharp nose she looked very exotic.
Now Dakota had
joined us and he stood on the block with the other two. Amanda
continually held her arms out to him and puckered her lips, but every
time he took a b-line for me. Of the three he was the shiest as he had
not come from a good home. My sister was shocked, saying that the last
time she visited the habitat, Dakota hadn't come near anyone, and was
jokingly annoyed with me.
It seemed like only a minute before we all
had to leave the little pack. We all filed out sadly, but we were all
so happy to have had the chance to interact with such lovely company.
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This was nice to read. The fact that Dakota connected with specifically you was absolutely adorable!
It shows how wolves can form friendships with creatures they like juast like people can.
There were a few blips though. One of the biggest things that bothered me was this sentence:
She she began to make another circle Nanouk jumped up.
I don't understand what it's supposed to say. Is it supposed to be "As she"?
Also, there are a couple spelling errors: "os" in the 4th full paragraph, "teethe" in the 6th, "wold" also in the 6th, and Nanouk/Nonouk's name changed slightly.
This was a very good story; it just needs some proofreading.
Thank you! And yeah, I'm very bad about proofreading lol.
Aww, so cute
. This was a very good description of your visit. I really want to go now after you wrote this.
One little suggestion:
teeth should be spelled without the e.
That spelling mistake is the only criticism I have with your piece.
The descriptions were very vivid and I thought that I was there with you and those wolves.
Anyway, nice job and keep writing!
Why do I always add that e? xD I know it's wrong but it just happens.
Anyway, Thanks!
aww!