Barefoot around town.
Stay nameless.
If I can't own your name, I can't
own your body
I want to twist
and push it to breaking
points awarded for infidelity
Through a muggy room
I catch your eye and then
It's like
God
She'd
look
so
good
In shackles, I find myself
biting
my nails
scratching at hell's gates
a dog, needing to
come inside
a criminal in his close up
caught
In the acting, I'd always struggle.
I am a performer, but terrible liar.
Are you
Believing any of this?
I hope
not because I'll surprise myself
Of that, I'm sure of no surprise.
But if you start to understand
There's no wall or
limitlessness.
There's just a bad dream
to shake you
and you'll walk down to the living
room filled with smoke and
you'll see as you scream
Benjamin.
Benjamin.
Benjamin.
The smoke clears, and all that's left is a creature, climbing from the window, sticky foot prints on the carpet. Misshapen and hideous, carrying over its shoulder a nameless woman, it made another exception for.
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