Yoursaleave.
And just as hearing the festival bells ring when my work is done
now hearing the whistle of the choir in your room. I find you not under
the bed shits as where I found you, in it.
but sitting firmly on your throne
looking
and smiling outwardly
upwardly
And it makes me drown in pride to see it.
Believe me when I say I will
listen when I say I will still speak
only now
I know.
You don't need.
Me?
No, not you
either way, I've found something good
in us, there lies the best of what?
Is left. The troubles of living in the small
time and time again, we complain
when we know we couldn't stand in A perfect World.
For each other, if we tried,
we might find some way to improve.
Perhaps
some cracks are meant to show.
Let them
Show them all as our proudest
wounds them.
We've grown
Grown under the piss stained nettles
And helped one another
understand
Things are not
Complicated
The same.
I don't look down
on you, I rely.
I don't envy or
discourage
This diary entry is
of much unimportance.
What is important
that you're responsible for
where I left. The best of
where my mind is
where is my mind?
as we hum along to the Pixies
They tell us what we need to know.
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