Hey Harry!
RandomTalks here with a short review!
Honestly, I had not predicted that the disagreement of the previous night would make a reappearance in this chapter. Maybe its because in the longer run, it really does not matter and is not of that much significance that all of them seem to be giving to it. Still, it is interesting how such a small misunderstanding diverts us from the main plot of the story for a while and making it more about the characters than the escape. I think its important to include all these other small things once in a while to give the readers a break, to let them take in all that is happening and maybe just spend some time with the characters to get a deeper understanding on them.
Aria seemed to be itching to know about the 'secret'. I guess its because she and Harry are really close and Harry especially is not the kind of person who can keep things in his stomach for long. Whatever it is, it comes out eventually and so I guess they have never had any secrets between them. It kind of explains 0why she is so curios now. In her defense, Harry is a little over dramatic here, and making a big deal out of a seemingly small thing. But then again, this is Harry.
I liked the fact that even though Aria had the choice, she did not eavesdrop in the conversation between Harry and Daisy. She is a morally good person and I liked that in the end, she gave them both their deserved privacy. Daisy was really the voice of reason and I could practically imagine her rolling her eyes at Harry in the conversation we did not get to hear. I also liked the fact that she did not drag it out and simply told Aria her worries. That was how easily it could have been solved - two dialogues.
But this whole thing once again reminded me of the fact that they are just teenagers and the argument somehow made it more realistic for me. You can see a misunderstanding like this taking place in real life; maybe it would not be as dragged out, but still it is relatable and realistic.
Now, I think that is the end of this chapter. It was definitely a short one, but the parts were much longer and had more content. I have a feeling that in the next chapter we are once again going back to the main mission and the plans, so this one was quite a welcome change from the usual pattern.
That's all!
Keep writing and have a great day!
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