Legacy here for a review.
I dislike how you used "consume" and "consumed" in the same stanza. Maybe a better word choice; a stronger or different verb could be used to replace either one.
When I read the third stanza out loud my mind put "lights" instead of "ignites". I don't know if that is my own personal word choice or if it is something that could be changed for better reading.
Other than that I like the poem. The ending is my favorite. I love how in the whole poem you are comparing her to fire, but are using different words instead of just fire. Makes it not too repetitive while also repeating the same idea, and that is hard to do without sounding redundant.
Points: 402
Reviews: 145
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