YES
YES
YES
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Inside-out
Is the same as
Outside-in.
~~~
Think about that.
They are the same thing.
Who knew?
I bet the Doctor did.
Okay, seriously. This is on the literally spot light and I wrote this in about two minutes. WHYYY?
Other than that please tell me what you think about this poem and how it makes you feel.
At first, when
I read the title, I thought that this was going to be a very deep subject. However when I started to read it I became confused.My guess is that it is based on popularity, but I still don't get it how is it humorous.
Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review!
I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about this.
Inside-out
It is the same as
Outside-in.
Maybe the Doctor did.
@DemonGoddess I fixed some things and I believe I managed to slip in a reference.
Hello Flumadiddle! Welcome to YWS! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
Inside out
Is the same as
Outside in.
--
Think about that.
They are the same thing.
{Insert funny comment here, like "mind blown"}
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