Well well well, as if I expected any better 
I like the imaginary and the descriptions created with lovely adjectives. I hate the way I can't say much about it hehe and how this isn't being useful at all. Ah one thing though, it could look better parted it stanza's 
Cheerios, Chandni
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In the beginning, the line breaks do seem a little forced, but halfway through, they start to make sense.
I'm just wondering: wouldn't it be better with the last word gone?
I'm questioning your line breaks on this one, Bradshaws, and the ending could be stronger.
However, yes, good imagery. And the play on 'worm' was humorous
Androgenderously Yours,
~Ed