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Alzora
My Garden
I wander through this endless garden.
Giant, jolly, fuzzy bumble bees buzz by me.
Flowers flop happily as I push past them.
Sweet fragrance fills the air.
I smile, filling myself with the sweetness,
As it fills me it melts my worries away.
All I need to know is me,
And my garden.
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