Hi! Fifth poem is now on the loose!!
Alzora
Fluffy
I pick up the teddy bear.
Its fur is soft,
Fluffy,
Long.
I run my hands through it, loving the cool feel.
I whisper to the bear,
"Fluffy."
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This poem make me think of my puppy, because he is a maltese shitzu so he's covered with fur, we nick-named him fluffy puppy, I realy like this poem its cute
goodjob
I like it. It's really cute about the teddy bear. Even it's short but I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing poems. You can write poems if you follow your heart.
Keep writing,
Alicia.
You real have a knack for poetry, don't you? The minimalism, word choice, and sort of story-telling here is really quite nice and I can already see a style developing in your poetry. Sorry if it seems like I'm stalking your posts but you happen to have all your poems on the top of the "Recent" list. :p