Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Sometimes, adults seem not to realize that this life shouldn’t be taken for granted. Caught up in this corrosive routine that involves working hard to maintain a decent living, they seem to have forgotten that we are here to learn something about life, not to ignore it or live it by others directions.
Tragedies can wake them up, as they are not invulnerable beings, making them question their lives and their purpose, leaving them with a powerful will to change something. However, weeks after these tragedies, they fall back in the circle of life, forgetting everything, sometimes experiencing heartbreaking flashbacks, but nothing more. There is no remedy for memory, these flashbacks seem to be like melodies stuck in their heads, but with no result other than setting up a deep-seated feeling of emptiness. They seem to be afraid of upholding the concrete happening that we are the ones responsible for making the most of our lives because no one knows what tomorrow will bring or if there is any tomorrow left.
Hmm...this was quite some piece here. Considering the title that we have got going on here and just the general air that this particular thing tries to depict, I honestly don't quite know what this might be. It feels like it could be some sort or pre amble towards a novel or a hint at that, it could be a bit of a short piece on adults...but this feels most like some sort of speech here that someone is giving about what they think of adults in general and what they sometimes do. At any rate, it was certainly pretty intriguing piece and feels oddly like its just calling a lot of people out there.
There's just a certain tone of admonishment that you seem to have gone with while discussing things that do sound like they do actually happen and cause some very real problems in life. It is certainly a piece that leaves you with quite a bit to think about after reading and despite being as short as it is, it really has a powerful impact on you as a reader, so I think you've done quite well here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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