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I found this a great read. I am such a fan of old English. The lay out was brilliant, especially the 'read, read, read'.
Your method is brilliant, it flows well. The darkness is mysterious.
Really well written piece of poetry, with some actual depth in it! Rare in young writers today. Well done to you.
Keep it up
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A very well written poem. Extremely interesting that you chose the formatting to be in Old English! Steady meter, which a reader such as myself is always grateful for. Old English poems are not my general area of expertise, so I'm afraid I can't give you much more than this! Keep writing!
Thank you very much! c: