Hey! Forever here with a review!!
First and foremost, the tense in this part was a lot better than the previous parts. For the previous parts, convert them into past tense.
Seems like Jack could do nothing to help the narrator and the narrator faced all the consequences of taking that drug in. The drug, as I already told is very dangerous.I don't know what drug it is but I am very very curious to knoe how tge students got hold of duch a dangerous drug. . Was it being sold somewhere out there, maybe at a secret place which the narrator was not aware of. Seems so.
Now I wonder about the goal of these friends. Earlier, it seemed to me that these friends just want the narrator to get addicted and earn some money but now it seems like their main intention is to kill. Otherwise, they would have given the drug to him. It's being cruel of the friends.
I wonder why Jack didn't inform anyone. Like we know that the narrator's mother is an alcoholic but there must be other people. Jack could have informed his own parents. I can't find the answer to thid question, maybe Jack themself was connected to thr matter to some extent. We can infer this from the fact that he guessed it very easily and also tge line "By the time I woke up again, I was in the streets. I was shivering uncontrollably, only in my boxers, and beside me a pool of vomit." Who took him to the streets? Must be Jack.
So the persn died at last due to a car accident. Final fate of drug-addicts... Overall, it was a good story to read and the most important thing is we can see the improvements in these three parts. That's great.
Keep Writing!!
~Forever
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