OKAY sorry if this review turns out weird, I find I can relate right away, and when I relate, I end up chatting peoples ears off and review as I go.
First verse: I liked this right away. I guess italics can have that affect on you, though I would love to know the reason why you chose italics instead of regular text. I'm pretty sure I'm like that friend. I had someone I held precious, to. She kind of hated me for it. Maybe not hate, but definitely was wary. Although, she acted like she loved me sometimes. She certainly got mad when I gave up on her and went for someone else. I realized that she would never feel the same. And when I did go for someone else, she acts like I cheated. And then she left. Sometimes, people will do that to you. She realizes what she did, though. And she out casted me for it, just like Denise did to your friend. Maybe your friend will never heal, maybe they will never forget Denise. It's hard. It hurts. It's like it's hard to breath because it feels like your lungs are soaked and wet and you wont choke but it feels so E X H A U S T I N G to breath. I get it.
And you are kind of like my friend, Kayte. She loathes her. She told me I was like a depressed person who sounds like I came from an asylum, ever since the girl left me. But want to know what my friend did? She went after that son of a ***** and she was out for blood. It's okay to leave for a quick moment, to extract vengeance. I didn't want it. I just wanted to leave it be. But after I got it, I actually felt a lot better. Maybe your friend will kick and squirm to the idea of getting back at Denise. And maybe vengeance is more trouble than what it's worth. But if that's the case, then I would suggest having as close of a bond as possible. Help him. Time will wear down walls. Help him make more friends, kicking and screaming. But don't push him too much. Coax and give time.
I am not telling you what to do, I am telling you what I would do 
again, sorry if this sounds weird-
Have a great day!
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