Hi names 22Midnight
hope your doing well, let's get into it!
First Impression: This poem definitely had a lot of strong feelings behind it about how selfish some people can be to others who never deserved it, and because of how realistic it was it really made me keep reading to the end.
I hope you have an amazing life
I hope you have a beautiful life
I hope you have a happy life
I hope you enjoy your selfish life
I hope you enjoy your entitled life
I hope you enjoy your shallow life
Because at least you have one to live
Just choosing these lines today because I found that they really stuck out to me the most because of how true they are when you put them into real life, you've written every line so well down to the very last word, every part drawing me in even more to carry on, it made me sad from the beginning through to the middle and then to the end.
Overall: it really hit home for how much some one can enjoy another's suffering which is horrible but none the less something that still happens even in real life. I think this was very well written and i wish that it had been given a tun more likes because it deserves it!
anyway that's it from me
hope you have a great dawn/dusk/midnight
See Ya
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