Hey there! Here's another review from me. :p This is a lovely poem, and it has a quality that allows it to resonate with an individual's feelings. It seems that this beautifully expresses what so many people think and feel. It flows well, and the thoughts are conveyed clearly and concisely, while still having that beautiful poetic feel.
I really like how you contrasted the "forever" and the "temporary." This feature emphasizes the mistaken wishes of a hopeful heart. Also, it's a great literary feature.
My final comment is that if this is something you have/are experiencing, don't lose hope! Also, myself and plenty of other YWS members are available for friendly support chatting if you need encouragement.
Thanks for sharing this poem!
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